Hawk & Croc Classic 157: Quagmire Part 26

Lesson in storytelling: Lay out the characters in the order they’re speaking and not the exact opposite, as I’ve done here.

Fortunately, we had established that Fire Raven speaks in orange, Diamond Ace speaks in yellow/blue, Croc speaks in green, and Hawk speaks in purple over the last year and change, so hopefully readers weren’t TERRIBLY confused by who was talking.

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